It is the time of year when student teachers begin their studies. I have met some face to face and others, rather strangely, on speaker phone. I hope that they will not be afraid of writing and that they will teach writing in the knowledge that being able to write is, essentially, something that is a part of who we all are.
I want them to know that writing is a language process that is, like listening, speaking and reading, available to all of us; that writing is for telling stories, for discovering what we know and understand, for defining who we are; that it is for celebration and lament; for sorting out and getting going; intertwined with thinking and a place where we can play. It can contribute to our well-being: it calms and reassures us; it allows us to untangle stuff; it affirms us and our place in the world. It is for imagining, dreaming, joking, investigating. It stays put. We can shape and mould it. We can use new language, and the older language that comes from our very roots. It can define who we are.
Generally, we have been taught to be afraid of writing: that it is difficult; that we need all kinds of hoists and props and pulleys to help us. I am not denying that it is complex and that writing remains difficult throughout our lives, even when we have published scores of best-selling novels. Learning to swim is difficult. Developing a good fashion sense is difficult. Riding a bicycle is difficult. We just have to get in the water, make some really toe-curling choices about how to dress, get on the bike. We can ride with stabilisers, splash about with armbands, borrow a jumper to see how it feels, and all the time, something inside us is working out how that works for us.
Writing is learned from the inside out. We must take for ourselves what we need to learn about writing and make it our own. We do that by writing in ways that are important to us. When we belong to a writing community we learn from everyone who is a part of it. Children learn from how we do things and how we seem to feel about it. Children need to gain a sense of what writing can do – for themselves and for others. They need learn how they can be in charge of their own writing. If we are not careful they may learn that we are afraid of writing or that we don’t like it or that their own ideas about what to write are not welcome. Or they can learn that you will write alongside them and sometimes make mistakes but that it doesn’t matter because you will try again and you love to hear what everyone has written because everyone writes differently and you will learn from them.
A challenge for teachers is how to balance the necessary mechanics of writing – pencil grip, letter formation, spelling, grammatical structure – with the essence of writing, which is about exploration and surprise and entertainment and introspection and ….. Far too many children experience writing as something that is exterior, that it is all about dots and upper case letters; or that the quality of a piece of writing depends on how many adjectives they can squeeze into it. In our anxiety to teach those things, it becomes easy to overlook the things about writing that cannot be neatly packaged as learning objectives or assessment criteria but which lie at the heart of assured writing.
I have a swimming instruction book first published in 1919 which begins with directions for land drills:
Breast Stroke
ARM DRILL – STANDING
Ready. Arms raised, extended forward, palms down, thumbs touching, fingers together.
One. Without bend at elbow or wrist the arms are swept sideways with some downward pressure, hands slightly turned and cupped, and taken to a position nearly in line with the shoulders, head gently raised. (breathe in.)
Two. With a slight twist of the wrists, the hands – palms downwards – are brought to a position in advance of the chin, the elbows bent and brought to the sides.
Three. The hands and arms – thumbs touching, fingers together – are stretched forward to full extent, and the head gently lowered. (Breathe out.)
Four. Pause
But only when you get into the water do you learn what it feels like and what your body can do in the water. If you only gave children colouring in sheets, few people would say you were teaching art. We have become so anxious about children learning to write, that we keep running alongside them, holding onto the bike or, worse, give them a lecture on the science of balance and propulsion and never get on the bike.
Writing is learned from the inside out: it is learned by writing. When published writers are asked for advice, what they say first and foremost is summed up by Ian Rankin: ‘Write lots. Read lots. Don’t give up’. Kate Clanchy says ‘We learn to write by reading; we learn to read by writing.’ We, teachers, need to get inside the skin of writing; for ourselves. And I acknowledge it’s emotional. Sometimes, it is utterly private. And we can’t always predict when it will be so. We need to build that awareness into our practice and to respect young writers as writers now, not some time in the future.
Let them loose!
Perhaps the best advice I can give you comes directly from my swimming instruction manual:
It is inadvisable to keep pupils with “breath expelled” whilst explanations are made.
Get writing!
